First Impressions

Just a quick introduction - this is the second blog that I have ever written. I started my first blog last year, during my AP Language and Composition class, and it was about a nonfiction book called Race. This year, in my AP Literature and Composition class, I have the exciting opportunity to now blog about a fiction book. Fiction is more my thing than nonfiction is, so I'm looking forward to being able to read a fiction book for this assignment. The book that I'll be reading over the next month is called The Red Tent by Anita Diamant. It from the point of view the daughter of Jacob, Dinah, and it is essentially the retelling Bible stories from the female point of view.

(I took this photo of my book, so don't worry, I don't need any citations!)

Immediately at the beginning of the novel, there is a prologue where Dinah addresses the reader. This is an interesting stylistic choice because I feel as though most books do not break the fourth wall and address the readers. Although it is unexpected, I really liked this choice because I immediately felt a connection with Dinah. She seems very pleased that I, along with the other readers of the book, have come to hear the stories that she has to tell: "I am so grateful that you have come. I will pour out everything inside me so that you may leave this table satisfied and fortified" (Diamant 3). I really enjoy feeling as though she wants me to know her stories and is very grateful that I have decided to read them. It makes me like her right away.

After the prologue, the stories start with Dinah's mothers' (her mothers being her actual mother and her mother's sisters) stories still told from the point of view of Dinah, because her mothers passed them down to her when she was younger. I have really enjoyed this book so far because of the descriptions of all the characters in Dinah's mothers' stories. She describes each of her mother's sisters in great detail: "Rachel's beauty was rare and arresting. Her brown hair shaded to bronze, and her skin was golden, honeyed, perfect. In that amber setting, her eyes were surprisingly dark, not merely dark brown but black as polished obsidian or the depth of a well" (Diamant 8-9). Diamant makes it very easy to picture all of the women in the novel because of the descriptions like the one of Rachel. The imagery in the novel feels very whimsical to me, especially because of comparisons to the moon, the sun, and other things such as obsidian. The imagery makes the novel really fun to read, and I especially enjoy how whimsical it all seems.

In addition, just in the first couple of chapters, I have noticed a motif/symbolism of the color red and blood. Much like in The Handmaid's Tale by Margaret Atwood, red in this novel seems to symbolize fertility or the lack of fertility, depending on the situation. The red tent is where the women go when they have their periods, which means that they are fertile. In Rachel's case, the blood to her symbolizes miscarriage and a lack of fertility. For her, "the bloody flood washed away her hopes" of having a child (Diamant 46). Eventually, though, the blood comes to symbolize the birth of her first child, which shows that she is fertile again: "there was bleeding long before [her son] appeared" (Diamant 70). I am interested to see how the motif of red and blood continues throughout the book.

Before I wrap up, there is one more thing I want to discuss. I know that I've already written more than anyone wants to read, but I want to finish with a thought that I had while reading. Often in class, we discuss how reliable a narrator is. Because this novel is from the point of view of Dinah and she tells stories that her mothers have passed down to her, I wonder if there are any details that she has left out, not necessarily purposefully, but just because her mothers forgot something or she has forgotten some details of the story. I don't get the feeling that she would purposely leave anything out, but I do wonder if anything is missing.

So far, I have really enjoyed The Red Tent. I really like the stylistic choices that Diamant has made, especially the use of imagery. I look forward to seeing how the stories continue and am excited to read Dinah's stories, which is the next section of the novel. 

Comments

  1. Hi Lily! I'm glad you're enjoying "The Red Tent" (sorry, I couldn't figure out how to italicize) so far; I am as well. I appreciated your discussion of the prologue and also thought it was unusual but welcoming. My favorite part of the prologue was the very first section--when Dinah talks about her name. Her description of the syllables of her name: "The first vowel high and clear, as when a mother calls to her child at dusk...(Diamant, 1) reminded me of the excerpt we read last year from "The House on Mango Street" about a girl named Esperanza. Both passages are apt at making something not so striking (a name) very visual, and I think this helped me to prepare for Diamant's descriptive writing style. At the same time, I was confused by one of the names or Hebrew words in the prologue: Selah. I'm sure you don't have an answer to why it's there, but I was wondering what your thoughts were about ending the prologue in that way. Happy writing!

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    1. Clara-
      Thank you so much! I'm really glad you brought that up because it led me to actually look up the word Selah. The definition that I found, according to the Google dictionary, is that it is an exclamation that occurs frequently at the end of a verse in Psalms and Habakkuk. I think that the ending the prologue that way makes a lot more sense with the knowledge of what Selah means.
      -Lily

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  2. Hi Lily-
    I really enjoyed reading your blog! The Red Tent sounds like a very interesting book with its combination of history and the female perspective. One similarity I noticed that my book, Lolita, has with yours, is the fact that both of the stories address that they are written with the idea in mind that someone else is reading it. In your case, Dinah just addresses the reader, but in my case, Lolita is framed as a piece of evidence in a way, being read by lawyers after the main character of the story is convicted of some crime. With this in mind, comparing the two books is interesting, considering how that framing in the beginning of a story can affect the reader. While I immediately felt that there was something wrong with my main character, you felt an instant connection with Dinah. I look forward to reading what else you have to say! Great job!

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  3. Lily, I like your discussion of the imagery and color symbolism in the book so far. It's interesting since the time period is so different than our contemporary times, so the author can't use the same kinds of imagery as the authors of the other novels. Good job remembering unreliable narrators, too.

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  4. Hi Lily, great post! I agree with all of your thoughts abot the stylistic elements, especially the point of view. I also like the fact that we are introduced to Dinah at the beginning, and that she possesses such a clear "voice", because it makes her feel more like a friend than a narrator. This seems to have the effect of a stronger connection between the reader and the story, which, for me at least, helps it to seem more real. I think the effect of reality is also seen in the fact that Dinah describes other characters the way that she personally sees them, whether that is good or bad. I just wonder about the strength of all of this. Do you think the story, at least what we have read so far, would be drastically different if it was told from a different point of view, or in a less personalized manner?

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